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duke123456

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[求助] 初次投稿,编辑来信看不明白,请教大家

初次投稿,编辑回信看不懂,请教一下大家,谢谢了。内容如下:

The reviewer has commented on your above paper and indicated that it is acceptable for publication with some corrections.

I invite you to revise and resubmit your manuscript carefully addressing the issues raised in the reviewer's comments (included below).

Please also:

a) outline each change made (point by point) as raised in the reviewer comments
   
  AND/OR

b) provide a suitable rebuttal to each reviewer comment not addressed

Please note that this journal offers a new, free service called AudioSlides: brief, webcast-style presentations that are shown next to published articles on ScienceDirect (see also http://www.elsevier.com/audioslides). If your paper is accepted for publication, you will automatically receive an invitation to create an AudioSlides presentation.

I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Yours sincerely,


Reviewer's comments:
The  above paper may possibly be of some technical interest. However, before submitting it to
The review process, it is requested that Authors improve substantially the English presentation, both grammar and style.

Authors  are strongly recommended to have their paper revised for language by a native English or equivalent expert.

Authors are asked to write in colour any language improvement made in their revised text.

For example in the Abstract:

lINE 3-  " respectively" is redundand and to be omitted
LINE 7- "With the increasing of annealing"  write "With the increase of annealing"  or  "With  increasing  annealing"

LINE 9- "to be superhydrophilic, and the hydrophilicity of the films remains "shall be "exhibit superhydrophilicity that remains  "  

etc.
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duke123456

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zhenghaiw: 金币+1, 感谢参与! 2013-09-04 23:53:29
具体是什么意思?好像只是英语表达方面的修改,是不是要求要英语重新修改后再重新投稿?还是说审稿人已经审稿了,并且可以接受发表?
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zhenghaiw: 金币+1, 有道理! 2013-09-04 23:53:46
The reviewer has commented on your above paper and indicated that it is acceptable for publication with some corrections.这句话是不是说修改后可以接受发表?
但是后面又有一句The  above paper may possibly be of some technical interest. However, before submitting it to The review process, it is requested that Authors improve substantially the English presentation, both grammar and style.这句是不是说英语语法等方面修改后才能审稿?
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zhenghaiw: 金币+1, 说到点子上了,呵呵! 2013-09-04 23:54:02
应该是可以接受的小修,但是,文稿的英文必须找专业人士润色。
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
zhenghaiw: 金币+1, 有道理,呵呵! 2013-09-04 23:54:12
英文的写作要好好改啊。
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
zhenghaiw: 金币+1, 感谢参与! 2013-09-04 23:54:21
要求你好好修改语言,最好找母语是英语的帮你润色。另外还要求你把文稿中修改的地方用有颜色的字体标出来!祝好!
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
稿件尚未送审,只是编辑部的技术审查!英语写作太差,返回作者修改重投!
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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
和我的差??多,也是修改,??求专家或??语润色,但我的还有两个审稿人的评论???????。

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
我的理解是修改后发表,因为是审稿人提出的一些具体问题。
乐观,真诚
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