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Steps to becoming a better writer:
1. Read, pay attention, and imitate.
2. Write in a journal.
3. Let go of ¡°academic¡± writing habits (deprogramming step!)
4. Talk about your research before trying to write about it.
5. Write to engage your readers¡ªtry not to bore them!
6. Stop waiting for ¡°inspiration.¡±
7. Accept that writing is hard for everyone.
8. Revise. Nobody gets it perfect on the first try.
9. Learn how to cut ruthlessly. Never become too attached to your words.
10. Find a good editor!
11. Take risks.

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Unit 1. Cut unnecessary words and phrases

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1. Dead weight words and phrases
e.g. As it is well known
As it has been shown
It can be regarded that
It should be emphasized that
2. Empty words and phrases
e.g. basic tenets of
methodologic
important
3. Long words or phrases that could be short
e.g. muscular and cardiorespiratory performance
4. Unnecessary jargon and acronyms
e.g. muscular and cardiorespiratory performance
Gliomagenesis
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5. Repetitive words or phrases
e.g.studies/examples
illustrate/demonstrate
challenges/difficulties
successful solutions
6. Adverbs
very, really, quite, basically, generally, etc.
7.A few other small tricks
¢Ù Eliminate negatives
¢ÚEliminate superfluous uses of ¡°there are/there is¡±
¢ÛOmit needless prepositions

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Ð޸ģºThis paper reviews cancer biology study design, using examples that illustrate specific challenges and solutions.

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Ð޸ģºIncreased athletic activity is associated with lower cardiovascular risk, lower blood pressure, and improved fitness.

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