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[求助] 一句话的翻译,请帮忙修改

与单施化肥相比,除了NPK处理脲酶活性显著高于NPK+OM外,NPK+OM处理土壤中酸性磷酸酶、转化酶、过氧化氢酶活性显著高于单施化肥及不施肥.

我的翻译如下: Comparing with chemical fertilizer applications only, except to the urease activity of NPK treatment was significant higher than NPK+OM treatment, the activity of acid phosphatase, catalase and invertase in NPK+OM was significant higher than other chemical fertilizer application only and CK.

审稿人说我的翻译有误,请帮忙修改,谢谢.
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Andyma

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潮流: 金币+1, ★★★很有帮助 2013-02-01 11:42:06
Only?  

Single is better in this case.
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潮流: 金币+1, ★★★很有帮助 2013-02-01 11:42:14
compare应改为compared, except to应改为except that,两个significant应改为significantly
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潮流: 金币+1, ★★★很有帮助 2013-02-01 11:41:55
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潮流: 金币+2, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2013-02-01 11:41:46
客观的说,你的中文表述存在严重问题,前面是“与单施化肥相比”,后面是“高于单施化肥及不施肥”,不可以这样用。

NPK+OM treatment resulted in significantly lower urease activity than NPK treatment. However, NPK+OM treatment had significantly higher activities of acid phosphatase, catalase and invertase than those of chemical fertilizer application alone and CK.
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借鉴了以上各位的意见, 我译成了这样,大家看看,有没有问题了.

in addition to NPK+OM treatment resulted in significantly lower urease activity than NPK treatment, NPK+OM treatment had significantly higher activities of acid phosphatase, catalase and invertase than those of chemical fertilizer application alone and CK.
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exceptiong for NPK+OM treatment resulted in significantly lower urease activity than NPK treatment, NPK+OM treatment had significantly higher activities of acid phosphatase, catalase and invertase than those of chemical fertilizer application alone and CK.
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