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your2007

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The absolute coefficient value of X2 was the largest (-2.116) of the relative variables indicating that V1 represented milk protein content mainly. Whereas , the absolute coefficient value of Y1 (hardness) was the largest (-1.894)  suggesting that W1 represented yoghurt hardness mainly.
审稿人觉得这里用词不妥,比如whereas 求达人帮帮改下这个句子,谢谢
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The absolute coefficient value of X2 was the largest (-2.116) among the relative variables, which indicated V1 as the main representative for milk protein content. Meanwhile, the absolute coefficient value of Y1 (hardness) was the largest, suggesting W1 as the major representative for yoghurt hardness.
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2楼: Originally posted by 李氏氏 at 2013-01-16 14:26:59
要不你上个中文给我看下吧

相对变量中,x2的绝对相关系数值最大,为-2.116,这表明V1这个变量主要代表反应牛奶蛋白的含量;在另一组变量中,Y1的绝对相关系数值最大,为-1,894,这表明w1这个变量主要代表酸奶质构中的硬度特征。
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3楼: Originally posted by nwsuafliu at 2013-01-16 15:33:43
The absolute coefficient value of X2 was the largest (-2.116) among the relative variables, which indicated V1 as the main representative for milk protein content. Meanwhile, the absolute coefficient ...

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