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kellyhuizi

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[求助] 论文在REVISE中的几个问题,请帮忙提供解决方法

一篇能源类的文章,投稿后进入REVISE,虽然明白审稿人的意见,但是不是针对某个问题的,所以想不出如何来按照这种意见来修改,请有经验的同学帮忙指点二三。对有所启发的建议,会不吝啬地赠送金币。下面是审稿人的意见,肯定意见不写了,只写需修改的。
1、The original content of this paper is somehow limited, in terms of methodology first and also as it does not provide enough assumptions for discussions before giving conclusion which appears therefore a bit too rapid.
2、While commenting the outcomes of calculation and giving conclusion, prior to that step, provide information on 'benchmark figure' to facilitate the reading and understanding of the findings.
3、However, a paper on this topic would need to go much further into the subject matter and provide some original insights and analyses. In order to interest more audience beyond China and upgrade its scientific quality, the paper would need to more-convincingly:
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(1) Give more details about the methodology, how did you do it, what kind of raw materials is used? where you want to choose this kind of material, why did you choose this kind of methodology? The drawbacks of this methodology. To use this kind of methodology, which kind of assumptions you need to give, explain the assumptions effect on your results. What is the limitation of your study based on the method which you considered..  In the conclusion part,  you may need to point out the limitations when you make a general conclusion

(2) "A benchmark is something whose quality or quantity is known and which can therefore be used as a standard with which other things can be compared."

(3) Based on the results in hand, perform more related analysis and go much deep to cuss your results. If neccesary, you could make
a comparison between your results and other results from different countries, in order to convince the reviewers.
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