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lxq211211

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[求助] 这种说法,我觉得欠妥。大牛们能帮改一改吗

However, on we know of no work has been reported yet on **/**** nanocomposite synthesis using melt compounding techniques。
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3楼: Originally posted by lxq211211 at 2012-07-13 20:06:15
However, to the best of our knowledge, no work has been reported yet on PMMA/**** nanocomposite synthesis using melt compounding techniques.

谢谢虫友。这样改,行不行?...

你这样写就真是的完全的中国式英语!
然而,就我们所知。。。。
换个位置更好,显得有深度的多!!!另yet和however重复了。。。也最好不要用“no”,我给你写成there is few work..
比如:
However, there is few work has been reported on PMMA/**** nanocomposite synthesis,to the best of our knowledge, using melt compounding techniques.
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9楼2012-07-15 08:34:18
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nieleimc

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sesame_oil: 金币+1, 感谢交流 2012-07-13 20:51:32
However, a careful seeking in the papers for nanocomposite synthesis using melt compounding techniques on **/**** was not  reported yet.
主要还要看前后句子的逻辑关系,不知这样可否。
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2楼2012-07-13 17:32:25
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lxq211211

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2楼: Originally posted by nieleimc at 2012-07-13 17:32:25
However, a careful seeking in the papers for nanocomposite synthesis using melt compounding techniques on **/**** was not  reported yet.
主要还要看前后句子的逻辑关系,不知这样可否。

However, to the best of our knowledge, no work has been reported yet on PMMA/**** nanocomposite synthesis using melt compounding techniques.

谢谢虫友。这样改,行不行?
3楼2012-07-13 20:06:15
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However,  few reports have concered themselves on  nanocomposite synthesis using melt compounding techniques
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4楼2012-07-14 15:05:43
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