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bzhyong

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[求助] 个人英文简历纠错-高分紧急求助

本人理工出身,英语水平一般。现在需要做一份英文简历。抽出自我评价部分的翻译求高手帮忙看看是否有硬伤。只要找出来就有bb奖励。
若是能给我添加上几句,更加感谢!
另外这个应聘对我非常重要,希望打酱油的就绕道吧。我若跳槽成功,会单独发bb庆祝的。
自我评价

掌握系统的材料专业知识,如金属材料、电子材料、高分子材料、无机非金属材料的制备和质量检测技术。
熟练使用制图软件,如Cad、Solid works、Pro/E等。
一年生产管理经验,负责大型国企生产线管理/操作,熟悉质量控制方法,参与公司操作/巡检规程的建立和修订。
与本公司各个部门以及联系密切的其他供应公司主要人员关系良好,担负本部门主要的出差任务。
熟练的口语英语和书面英语。
自信,乐观。爱好爬山、音乐、摄影、志愿者等。曾徒步攀登山东多处山脉,也曾获得第十一届全国运动会优秀志愿者称号。

Self Assessment

Grasp the system of professional material knowledge, such as metal materials, electronic materials, polymer materials, silicate materials preparation and quality testing technology.
Skilled in the use of drawing software, such as Cad, Solid works, Pro/E, etc.
A years experience of production management, responsible for the large state-owned enterprises production line management/operation, familiar with quality control method, participating in the operation/inspection rules the establishment and revision.
Good English both in spoken and written
Self-confidence, optimism. Hobby is Mountain climbing, music, photography, volunteers, etc..
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agar

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bzhyong: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助 2012-07-09 20:34:41
ailing2023: 金币+1, thanks for your enthusiastic help,you are very kind 2012-07-09 20:51:52
昵称让人头疼: 回帖置顶 2012-07-10 09:21:50
抛砖引玉,锻炼自己一下帮你修改一下。
首先要支持楼上说Master那位。
Self Assessment

Mastered the expertises in material science, such as material knowledges involved in metal, electronics and polymers, as well as knowledges and techniques in silicate preparation and quality tests.
Skilful in using graphic softwares, such as Cad, Solid works, Pro/E, etc.
One year experience in production management, responsible for production line management/operation in a state-owned large enterprise, Familiar with quality control protocols, participated in the establishment and revision of the operation/inspection rules.
Good English (speaking and writing)
Self-confident, optimistic. Hobby: Mountain climbing, music listening, photographing, volunteering, etc..
4楼2012-07-09 19:42:00
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ziyu070602

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两娃娃的爹

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bzhyong: 金币+5, 有帮助 2012-07-09 19:14:17
通篇看了一下,仅找出一个小毛病: Cad →CAD   
我本将心比明月,奈何明月照沟渠。
2楼2012-07-09 16:07:03
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bzhyong: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助 2012-07-09 19:15:34
ailing2023: 金币+1, thanks for your help 2012-07-09 20:51:27
我感觉掌握应该用master比grasp好
坚持努力
3楼2012-07-09 17:01:58
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agar

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bzhyong: 金币+5, ★★★★★最佳答案 2012-07-09 20:34:26
ailing2023: 金币+1, thanks for your help 2012-07-09 20:52:04
呵呵,第一句掉了系统地,
改为
Mastered the expertises systematically in material science......后面不变。
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