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djjianglei

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[求助] materials &design 审稿意见求助

投materials & design,under review 20多天后,给了Revise.

The reviewers have commented on your above paper. They indicated that it is not acceptable for publication in its present form.

However, if you feel that you can suitably address the reviewers' comments (included below), I invite you to revise and resubmit your manuscript.

Please carefully address the issues raised in the comments.

If you are submitting a revised manuscript, please also:

a) outline each change made (point by point) as raised in the reviewer comments
   
  AND/OR

b) provide a suitable rebuttal to each reviewer comment not addressed


To submit your revision, please do the following:

1. Go to: http://ees.elsevier.com/jmad/

2. Enter your login details

3. Click [Author Login]
This takes you to the Author Main Menu.

4. Click [Submissions Needing Revision]

When submitting your revised manuscript, please ensure that you upload the source files (e.g. Word). Uploading only a PDF file at this stage will create delays should your manuscript be finally accepted for publication.  If your revised submission does not include the source files, we will contact you to request them.

I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Yours sincerely,

K.L. Edwards
Editor in Chief
Materials and Design

Reviewers' comments:

there are a lot of drawbacks in the text and it is recommended that the manuscript be revised (major) before further consideration (English professional may help).

Comments:
-        The long confusing sentences in all parts of the manuscript (for example the first and last sentence in abstract; the first two sentences in introduction and so on ......).
-        Experimental section: the dimensions of specimens were not clearly stated. The detail experiments and test must be stated (for example mechanical tests and weight loss).   
-        Results and discussion: The long confusing sentences (for example the first sentence in mechanical properties in page ** . There are many others ).
-        There is no page numbers.
-        There is no Figure numbers.

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审稿意见没有怎么提及文章内容的问题,主要是语言方面,这是不是说明英语太差,审稿人直接没有仔细看文章内容,属于最初的语言关没有通过,重新修改后还有机会么?另外本文是混凝土耐久性方面的文章,不知道主题合适不,还望高人指点!
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caiwangtan

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【答案】应助回帖

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
djjianglei: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢! 2012-05-29 13:19:43
djjianglei: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助, 再次感谢! 2012-06-28 18:09:37
既然让你修改了,就好好改改,尤其是语言这块,机会很大的,恭喜!
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yanwuliaorao

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【答案】应助回帖

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
djjianglei: 金币+2, ★★★很有帮助, 第一次发帖、评分,没有经验,不懂如何奖励金币,真心感谢您的帮助! 2012-05-29 13:22:01
djjianglei: 金币+10, ★★★很有帮助, 再次感谢! 2012-06-28 18:09:52
对内容没有质疑就说明内容还可以。
针对语言提出了不少问题那就好好改吧!
改后的希望是比较大的,祝好运!
阳光总在风雨后!
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