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下面是我写的一小段英语，请高手帮忙润色！ Furthermore, if two surfaces interact weakly, the contact angle is large; if two surfaces interact strongly, the contact angle is small. For example, the energy of binding of gold adatoms with the graphite substrate is of order 0.45 eV/atom, and the contact angle between gold nanoparticle and graphite substrate is 129. The interaction between gold and tungsten is as high as 3.3-4.1 eV/atom, and the contact angle between gold nanoparticle and tungsten substrate is 63. 另外，”界面能的大小“如何用英语表达？ |
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Furthermore, if two surfaces have weak interaction, the contact angle is large. On the contrary, if they have strong interaction, the contact angle is small. For example, the binding energy of gold adatoms with the graphite substrate is of an order of 0.45 eV/atom, and the contact angle between the gold nanoparticle and the graphite substrate is 129. Interaction between gold and tungsten is as high as 3.3-4.1 eV/atom, and the contact angle between the gold nanoparticle and the tungsten substrate is 63. 界面能： interfacial energy |
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Furthermore, if two surfaces have weak interaction the contact angle is large while it will be small on the contrary. For example, the binding energy of gold adatoms with the graphite substrate is 0.45 eV/atom with their contact angle is 129. Interaction between gold and tungsten is as high as 3.3-4.1 eV/atom while their angle is 63. 界面能： interfacial energy （请楼主检查一下专业知识，原文翻译太罗嗦） |
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wenhualuo: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢！ 2012-04-06 19:00:35
wenhualuo: 金币+20, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢！ 2012-04-06 19:00:35
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“two surfaces have weak interaction” 可以，如果你觉得不够好，也可以改成“the interaction between two surfaces is weak”或者"two surfaces interact weakly"都可以。. 界面能的大小(应该不是指体型上的大小)个人认为可以翻译成the amount of interfacial energy. |
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