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The revised manuscript is improved compared with the original submission. However, the authors have made little effort to edit the manuscript for the numerous language errors that it contains. The revisions have added more languagae problems in a few cases. I would strongly suggets that theauthors follow the advice of the Reviewer #1 and have the paper English edited. There are numerous bigger and smaller errors in the manuscript that include theuse of a singular instead of a plular form, inappropriate terms (e.g. smalerr instead of lower on l. 90, etc.).
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