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艳阳

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[求助] 帮忙翻译个省略句

使用方法1 , A,B,C 三个指标与方法5相比分别降低了 1%, 2% 和3%;
使用方法2 , A,B,C 三个指标与方法5相比分别降低了 10%, 20% 和30%;
使用方法3 , A,B,C 三个指标与方法5相比分别降低了 4%, 5% 和6%;
使用方法4 , A,B,C 三个指标与方法5相比分别降低了 7%, 8% 和9%。

这种并列句,省略句该怎么翻译啊。重点是句子的结构,及连贯性不好把握。请高手帮忙啊。
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weichin

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艳阳(金币+1, 翻译EPI+1): ★有帮助 2012-01-14 14:39:04
爱与雨下(金币+1): 2012-01-14 15:13:15
爱与雨下(翻译EPI-1): 2012-01-17 08:41:05
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Compared with approach 5, approach 1 results in a decrease of indicators A, B, and C by 1%, 2%, and 3% respectively.
Compared with approach 5, approach 2 results in a decrease of indicators A, B, and C by 10%, 20%, and 30% respectively.
Compared with approach 5, approach 3 results in a decrease of indicators A, B, and C by 4%, 5%, and 6% respectively.
Compared with approach 5, approach 4 results in a decrease of indicators A, B, and C by 7%, 8%, and 9% respectively.
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楼: Originally posted by weichin at 2012-01-13 21:14:47:
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Compared with approach 5, approach 1 results in a decrease of indicators A, B, and C by 1%, 2%, and 3% respectively.
Compared with approach 5, approach 2 results in a decrease of ind ...

我想翻译成一个连贯的省略句啊。单句是没有什么难度的哈。不过还是谢谢你的参与!
3楼2012-01-14 14:40:13
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weichin

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3楼: Originally posted by 艳阳 at 2012-01-14 14:40:13:
我想翻译成一个连贯的省略句啊。单句是没有什么难度的哈。不过还是谢谢你的参与!

抱歉啊,能力所限。一个连贯的省略句,很难做到,并列成分太多,会歧义的,局型的简单是有限度的。愿听坛子里高人指教。
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爱与雨下(金币+1): 2012-01-17 08:40:57
sltmac(金币+9, 翻译EPI+1): 2012-02-07 09:14:57
Comparing with approach 5, index A, B & C decreased by1%, 2%, and 3% respectively in the first solution, reduced by 10%, 20%, and 30%separately in the solution 2, at the same time fell by 4%, 5%, and 6% in the solution3 and in the fourth solution declined by 7%, 8%, and 9% respectively.
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5楼2012-01-16 19:33:10
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楼主  其实就是并列结构, 主语都是A,B,C 三个指标。不难翻。就是要注意下降的用词变化防止重复,和连词使用。
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weichin

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6楼: Originally posted by dangwenwen at 2012-01-16 19:35:48:
楼主  其实就是并列结构, 主语都是A,B,C 三个指标。不难翻。就是要注意下降的用词变化防止重复,和连词使用。

句子不是简单的堆砌单词,没有句法,如何表意啊……
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7楼2012-01-16 22:57:40
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爱与雨下(金币+1): 2012-01-17 08:40:49
Comparing with approach 5, index A, B & C decreased by1%, 2%, and 3% respectively in the first solution, reduced by 10%, 20%, and 30%separately in the solution 2, at the same time fell by 4%, 5%, and 6% in the solution3 and in the fourth solution declined by 7%, 8%, and 9% respectively.

只能这样了。 他就是个简单句啊。 根本复杂不起来啊。就一个主语, 又没有定语修饰啊,写论文啊客观描述数据,又不是写记叙文啊。
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8楼2012-01-17 00:15:56
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如果你不信,非得用什么复杂句式,你可以先用中文组织一下。 中文组织不起来英文一定不行。
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weichin

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8楼: Originally posted by dangwenwen at 2012-01-17 00:15:56:
Comparing with approach 5, index A, B & C decreased by1%, 2%, and 3% respectively in the first solution, reduced by 10%, 20%, and 30%separately in the solution 2, at the same time fell by ...

这个句子倒是很有记叙文的风格,辞藻变换丰富,但是句子不通。专业论文的句子也要合乎语法。就中文而言,一篇语法错误连篇的文章,恐怕很难见诸于高端期刊。
谢谢交流。
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