查看: 1252  |  回复: 3
当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖,点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖

songjinlong

铜虫 (正式写手)

[求助] Materials and Corrosion给小修,有个审稿意见没看懂,望高手们帮忙?

高手们,审稿人给出的一条审稿意见,但没看懂,忘高手能帮忙看一下:
On p. 7, last paragraph, the authors state that EDS shows the presence of "metallic elements" Mg, Zn, Al. However, with standard EDS it is not possible to distinguish metallic states from ionic states of the same elements, therefore the authors should remove that claim. Same is true for the subsequent description of nonmetallic elements.

这个意见没搞明白呀,我主要说有金属元素和非金属元素,我的论文中内容如下
EDS and XRD measurements were conducted to characterize the chemical composition of XXXXXXXXX. Fig. 4 shows the EDS spectra of the Mg alloy surfaces. It can be clearly seen that the untreated Mg alloy surfaces consist of metal elemental Mg, Al, Zn, and Mn without any non-metal elements. Compared with the untreated Mg alloy surfaces,XXXXXXXXXXXXX on the Mg alloy surfaces processed in 60 min is mainly composed of metal elemental Mg and non-metal elemental O and Cl.
回复此楼

» 猜你喜欢

» 本主题相关价值贴推荐,对您同样有帮助:

Happy
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

songjinlong

铜虫 (正式写手)

求高人解答,尤其是高材料、化工的高人。
Happy
3楼2011-12-13 17:52:16
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
查看全部 4 个回答

qingyizeng

金虫 (正式写手)

博敬翟琦_云客

【答案】应助回帖

感谢参与,应助指数 +1
编辑可能是说你做了EDS 不能表面元素的价态,无法知道元素的存在形式!
   可能你在文章中用的是元素缩写, 就是常用的元素表示,这样可能使人误解为是元素单质。所以编辑可能是想让你用 元素的英文表示吧! 就是用英文单词表示。      
只是个人看法!  不知道是否正确。
2楼2011-12-13 16:59:31
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

songjinlong

铜虫 (正式写手)

高手在吗,大侠,大哥,大姐,帮帮忙!
Happy
4楼2011-12-14 10:31:19
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
最具人气热帖推荐 [查看全部] 作者 回/看 最后发表
[有机交流] OpenAI又攻克数学难题了,离AI做有机合成还有多远? +4 wangyl_123 2026-10-10 8/400 2026-10-12 18:09 by wangyl_123
[硕博家园] 极限拉扯,如何抉择 +5 Isak0320 2026-10-12 7/350 2026-10-12 18:03 by 有人要害朕
[教师之家] 课题组会帮你通过考核么? +3 好运来~9527 2026-10-10 6/300 2026-10-12 14:55 by 简单化xn
[公派出国] 售一区SCI文章T0P,我:8O.551.O54,科目全,可十急 +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 9/450 2026-10-11 22:34 by XQNyDCa1Tk5n
[公派出国] 售SCI一区文章,我:8O5.5.1.O5.4,科目全,可伽急 +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 10/500 2026-10-11 22:26 by XQNyDCa1Tk5n
[找工作] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8.O55.1.O.54,科目全,可十急 +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 8/400 2026-10-11 22:26 by XQNyDCa1Tk5n
[考博] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8.O55.1.O.54,科目全,可十急 +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 9/450 2026-10-11 22:15 by XQNyDCa1Tk5n
[考博] 售SCI一区文章,我:8.O.55.1.O.54,科目齐全,可伽急 +3 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 7/350 2026-10-11 22:11 by XQNyDCa1Tk5n
[教师之家] 售SCI文章,我:8O5.5.1.O.54,科目齐全,可+急 (EPI+-1)(金币-50) +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 10/500 2026-10-11 22:06 by XQNyDCa1Tk5n
[教师之家] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8.O.55.1.O.5.4,科目全,可+急 (EPI+-1)(金币-50) +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 10/500 2026-10-11 14:25 by VOMexwnDzOFZ
[教师之家] 售SCI文章,我:8O.5.5.1O.54,科目全,可十急 (EPI+-1)(金币-50) +4 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 7/350 2026-10-11 14:05 by VOMexwnDzOFZ
[考研] 售SCI文章,我:8O.5.5.1O.54,科目全,可十急 +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 8/400 2026-10-11 13:51 by VOMexwnDzOFZ
[硕博家园] 售SCI-T0P文章,我:8O.5.5.1.O.54,科目齐全,可+急 +5 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 8/400 2026-10-11 13:45 by VOMexwnDzOFZ
[找工作] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8O.55.1.O.5.4,科目齐全,可+急 +3 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 7/350 2026-10-11 10:54 by VOMexwnDzOFZ
[找工作] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8O.55.1.O.5.4,科目齐全,可+急 +4 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 7/350 2026-10-11 10:34 by VOMexwnDzOFZ
[考博] 招收博士生一名 +3 mandolin 2026-10-10 3/150 2026-10-11 10:21 by 不是山谷!
[公派出国] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8O.55.1.O.54,科目全,可伽急 +4 qR2AdCWTVtkw 2026-10-09 4/200 2026-10-11 03:14 by M0zrYVSAnxpE
[有机交流] 各位大佬,路线设计求助 +6 zapen 2026-10-08 8/400 2026-10-10 15:59 by zapen
[基金申请] 入职后第一次管课题组的专利缴费,对账才发现官费比别人多掏了一倍 +5 13108017953 2026-10-08 5/250 2026-10-10 11:15 by wdwd123
[有机交流] 我应该选哪条合成路线让实验成功率高一些? +5 jing816y 2026-10-08 9/450 2026-10-10 09:05 by zapen
信息提示
请填处理意见