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yinguojie

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[求助] 如何将这句话变短一点? 自己改了下 大家看看如何?

A series of heterocyclic Ir-complexes containing N and O has been reported by the group of Lamansky. in 2001 (Lamansky et al., 2001), among it, the luminous wavelength of complexes could have a great change when the conjugated system of(C—N) changed for such metal complexes by comparing Ir(bo)2acac with Ir(bon)2acac.

自己修改的,大家看下怎么样?
According to the stury of the group of Lamansky. in 2001 (Lamansky et al., 2001),  the luminous wavelength of complexes could have a great change when the conjugated system of(C—N) changed for such metal complexes.
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yinguojie

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编辑还提出,后边的Ir(bo)2acac with Ir(bon)2acac 应该用 trivial names ,不明白是什么意思
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2楼2011-08-18 14:50:04
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Carena

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楼主能不能把你表达的中文写出来?
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3楼2011-08-18 14:57:19
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yinguojie

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3楼: Originally posted by Carena at 2011-08-18 14:57:19:
楼主能不能把你表达的中文写出来?

根据Lamansky.小组的研究结果,配合物的发光波长会根据共轭体系的改变而改变

这个是大概意思
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Carena

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yinguojie(金币+20, 翻译EPI+1): 2011-08-18 16:01:17
如果你只想表达这个意思的话,那原来的话就是繁琐了点。

According to the study of Lamansky. group in 2001 (Lamansky et al., 2001),     the luminous wavelength of complexes would change as the the conjugated system of(C—N) changed

楼主可根据具体情况参考改动
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6楼2011-08-18 15:50:46
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zou-yanhua

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yinguojie(金币+10): 2011-08-18 16:01:22
According to the reseach of Lamansky and his co-workers in 2001,  the luminescent wavelength of the complexes would change as the conjugated system  changed.
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