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Comparing with pollution transfer that is the main way for many less developed countries, cleaner production (CP) is less environmental contamination and is a more effective way to control heavy metals pollution. However, it is difficult to implement CP in these countries.

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sltmac(金币+1): 辛苦 2011-08-09 13:15:48
wg423(金币+1): 您好,请问您是否有兴趣应聘本版顾问? 2011-08-09 18:53:10
The promotion of cleaner production (CP) in high polluting industries is an effective way to control heavy metals pollution for developing countries. However, there are more challenges for these countries to develop an effective environmental policy to make enterprises to invest in CP. Even in developed areas of these countries, pollution transfer is still the main way to control the pollution, which causes more serious environmental contamination.
是从这里把三句话缩为一句话把?
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sltmac(金币+1): 谢谢交流~ 2011-08-09 10:02:59
dxiaoqing(金币+1): 谢谢 金币开始设的太少了 不好意思啊 2011-08-09 22:19:47
Compared with the pollution transfer which was applied in many less developed countries, the cleaner production (CP) is more environmentally friendly and more effective to control the heavy metal pollution. However, it is difficult to be implemented in these countries.
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sltmac(金币+1): 欢迎交流~ 2011-08-09 13:15:37
dxiaoqing(金币+1): 谢谢 金币开始设的太少了 不好意思啊 2011-08-09 22:19:33

Compared with pollution transfer which is the main solution to metal pollution in less developed countries, cleaner production(CP) produces less pollution and is a more effective way. However, it’s difficult to be put into practice in these countries.
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4楼: Originally posted by 古可ぷ at 2011-08-09 11:20:06:
The promotion of cleaner production (CP) in high polluting industries is an effective way to control heavy metals pollution for developing countries. However, there are more challenges for these co ...

是这个意思 不过我想强调的是清洁生产而非污染转移 还有就是句子尽可能简练
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