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0202liuyan

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This is an excellent paper from the technical viewpoint but there is one conceptual problem and a small number of language problems that must be addressed.

1. 略

2. Certain words and phrases are used that are not clear as to meaning and are not normally used in english language publications on this subject. They include "protein poisoning" and "loosening" with reference to protein denaturation,

3. Under Apparatus, note that fluorescence data were not performed, they were obtained.

4. There is quite a lot of discussion in the Results section. For example, the first three sentences are not appropriate for this section.

第3点提到的荧光数据不全的问题,应该怎么解决,请大家伙帮忙看看,多谢
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0202liuyan(金币+1): 多谢,可能是图表中的问题 2011-05-10 08:29:17
你需要在实验部分更详细地交代荧光数据的获取实验,以消除审稿人的担心。
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0202liuyan

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希望大家多提些意见,谢谢了
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0202liuyan(金币+4): 多谢帮忙,是这个意思 2011-05-11 08:32:25
问题2可引用相关文献来说明在蛋白变性中是有“蛋白质中毒”或“loosening”这种说法的
问题3可以把实验结果部分的“perform”这个词直接改成“obtained”
问题4直接把前3句删了,或者说明理由为什么不能删
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