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dingluren

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[求助] 大家帮我看看审稿意见!谢谢

The manuscript suffers from a verbose presentation. This needs to be suitably modified to shorten the text mostly in the discussion part. Since the major work has been highlighted  in Fig 5, a detailed legends discussing the results would be helpful . In fact, it would be better to combine the Results & the Discussion sections, if the journal allows such presentations.

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dingluren

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给的是小修的意见。一共就这么一个意见。我该怎么改啊?
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dingluren(金币+2): 2011-04-22 21:51:34
嫌你的文章有点长,建议discuss和results合并切来,精短文章
按要求改吧,祝好运
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dingluren(金币+2): 2011-04-22 21:53:06
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Originally posted by dingluren at 2011-04-22 18:17:48:
The manuscript suffers from a verbose presentation. This needs to be suitably modified to shorten the text mostly in the discussion part. Since the major work has been highlighted  in Fig 5, a deta ...

discuss和results合并起来一起讨论,内容减少一点
梦想会实现
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dingluren

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Originally posted by ask_R at 2011-04-22 20:49:37:
discuss和results合并起来一起讨论,内容减少一点

要听他的吗?那样就要大改动了。

是不是还要把图的说明写详细些啊?
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dingluren(金币+1): 2011-04-23 12:34:42
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Originally posted by dingluren at 2011-04-22 18:27:36:
给的是小修的意见。一共就这么一个意见。我该怎么改啊?

一段意见,改的地方还是不少,编辑也是举了些例子及建议。要好好修改,语言问题比较多。
The manuscript suffers from a verbose presentation. This needs to be suitably modified to shorten the text mostly in the discussion part. Since the major work has been highlighted  in Fig 5, a detailed legends discussing the results would be helpful . In fact, it would be better to combine the Results & the Discussion sections, if the journal allows such presentations.
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dingluren

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Originally posted by visitor958 at 2011-04-22 22:01:13:
一段意见,改的地方还是不少,编辑也是举了些例子及建议。要好好修改,语言问题比较多。
The manuscript suffers from a verbose presentation. This needs to be suitably modified to shorten th ...

哪个地方是说语言问题?是说我英语表达不行吗?
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Originally posted by dingluren at 2011-04-23 12:35:37:
哪个地方是说语言问题?是说我英语表达不行吗?

说你写得有点啰嗦,自己看看吧,精简一点。还有,有时写得不清楚,审稿人也这么说。
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xiaoyu1014126

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小改已经很不错啦!如果压制不错就花点钱给润色公司改吧
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