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xiaotuzi1576

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[交流] 文章修改意见回来了…虫子们帮忙看一下吧

\(^o^)/~文章修改意见回来了……但是有的地方理解的不是很明确…麻烦虫子们帮忙看一下吧…

PS:呵呵 谢谢大家的祝福哦……其实还有其他的意见…但那些都是需要补充实验的…所以没有放上来哦…… 这些是编辑的建议……

因为是第一次发文章得到建议所以有一些语句我理解的不是很明白…所以才放上来求个翻译正解哦……希望大家能帮忙哦:)谢谢……谢谢哦

in the abstract it is written "the degradation rate reached 98.6%". The unit of a rate should contain "1/time". So, it is doubtful if this quantity should be called a rate. In addition, can all decimal places be considered significant? If not explicitly justifiable, the value should be rounded off.
-Everywhere in the manuscript there should be a space between a value and its unit.
--the accuracy of the method of Scherrer to determine the crystallite size is only about 10%. Consequently, the results of this technique cannot be presented with more than two digits. Values in the manuscript should be rounded off.
-I could not find indicated in the manuscript how the doping concentration ratios in the solid have been measured. Please, improve. Indicate also the accuracy of the method.
-Conclusion section: the last two sentences can be omitted, since they cannot be considered to be a conclusion of the work. This is especially true for the sentence "How to keep etc".
-Please, give error bars in the figures 5, 6 and 7. See also the first remark above.

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xiaotuzi1576(金币+1): 2011-03-07 21:36:41
没什么问题吧,改过来就好了
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楼主加油哦。预祝楼主早日高中!
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看着都是小问题
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楼主的文章应该修改后节能接收了,看着没有很原则性的东西,能修改的就修改,不行的就解释
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看来楼主又要多一篇文章了,祝福你
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小问题啊,按照他说得改过来就行啦啊
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祝顺利,好好改改没问题的
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好好修改 祝福你
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审稿人认真啊,都是小问题,预祝楼主早日接受文章!
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没什么问题吧,好好修改就好了
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degradation rate 是下降速率 ,不是下降率的祭祀吧;
数字 和单位之间要有空格;
由于你用的方法的系统误差在10%左右,所有注意有效数字的保留,
你用的掺杂方法,应该提到掺杂浓度,我想应该包括表观的和实际的;
结论中有两句话要删除,因为那不能看做是结论,尤其是那句“How to keep etc".
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