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tata118119

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本文利用改装的高压静电场解冻装置,以鱼为例通过改变电极形状、解冻电压等实验参数,实验研究了高压静电场对它的解冻效果,测定了解冻后鱼的汁液流失量和细菌含量,同时与自然解冻的鱼进行了对比。实验结果表明:高压静电场能够显著提高鱼的解冻速度,与自然解冻的鱼相比较,经高压静电场解冻的鱼细菌含量少,汁液流失量低,是一种良好的替代方法。

In this paper, using fish as a model, the author has  investigated the thawing effect of the high-voltage electrostatic field, admeasuremented the thawed fish’s drip loss and the bacterial contamination utilizing a converted the high-voltage electrostatic equipment by changing the electrode arrangement and the voltage. At the same time, the results are compared with nature defrosting. The results indicate the high-voltage field can improve the thawing rate significantly and reducing the risk of bacterial contamination. the high-voltage electrostatic field is a good alternative methods.

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zehuac(金币+1):谢谢参与哈,希望以后更加积极的应助 2010-06-20 21:48:03
tata118119(金币+2): 2010-06-22 13:45:13
The thawing effect of the high-voltage electrostatic field on thawing was  investigated with fish as a model ,  the drip loss and the bacterial contamination of the thawed fish were measured by altering  the electrode arrangement(本人以为应该为shape) and the thawing  voltage. Comparision with nature defrosting indicated the high-voltage field could  improve the thawing rate significantly and withfewer   bacterial and lower drip loss  (汁液流失量低 好像没有翻译吧), so it could be  a good alternative methods(这个S 应该去掉的,楼主有些粗心了). 改的不好,见谅!!
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wypward(金币+1):谢谢参与 2010-06-20 18:04:57
tata118119(金币+1): 2010-06-22 13:45:21
At the same time, the results are compared with nature defrosting. The results indicate the high-voltage field can improve the thawing rate significantly and reducing the risk of bacterial contamination. the high-voltage electrostatic field is a good alternative methods.


有点罗嗦, the results are compared with nature defrosting 这个意思直接可以和后面连在一起。
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noleg

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zehuac(金币+1):谢谢参与哈,希望以后更加积极的应助 2010-06-21 07:35:15
tata118119(金币+12, 翻译EPI+1): 2010-06-22 13:44:34
In this paper, the influence on fish thawing of the high-voltage electrostatic field was investigated using fish as the object model. The drip loss of the thawed fish and the bacterial contamination determined utilizing a converted high-voltage electrostatic equipment by changing the electrode arrangement and the voltage, in comparison with that of nature thawing. The result showed that the the thawing rate in high-voltage field was improved significantly and with fewer bacterial contaimination and lower drip loss, thus it was supposed to be a better candidate solution to future thawing.

楼主的翻译看着有点象读者的评语哈~~~建议楼主今后多看看科技英语翻译方面的书籍。

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楼主,美语习惯用被动,你可以多看看老美写的论文,然后就是用此地道方面,你这里还是需要好好改改的
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