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[求助] 可以这样用英语表达吗?谢谢

The up end of the dashed lines corresponds to the inclination angles that the ship shifted again
上端对应的倾斜角度是船体再次倾斜的角度

g is the original centre of gravity of the liquid, and  G is the new centre of gravity of the liquid.

The repaired compartments with some water
这样表达可以吗?

【图标题】@90, @82, @30 and @1.5 are the longitudinalcoordinates of four sections of hull

The force was programmed increase at an average of 10 KN
编辑程序时,设定力以10kn 递增

In the calculation of ****, calculation of the maximum shear force is important and that of the state of ship on the water and load distribution.
在计算过程中,计算最大剪力是重要的,船体在水面的状态和载荷分布也是重要的

The mistake was corrected and marked in red inrevised paper.

【翻译】桌面是朝上的

Then the ***** process of the four cases were simulated.
接下来模拟了四个案例的****过程

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wyjjf: 金币+15, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-10-21 07:57:42
The up end of the dashed lines corresponds to the inclination angles that the ship shifted again.【可以】
上端对应的倾斜角度是船体再次倾斜的角度

g is the original centre of gravity of the liquid, and  G is the new centre of gravity of the liquid.
【可试用】
g and G are the original and new centers of gravity of the liquid, respectively.

The repaired compartments with some water
这样表达可以吗?【表、图题可以】

【图标题】@90, @82, @30 and @1.5 are the longitudinal coordinates of four sections of hull 【可】

The force was programmed TO increase at an average of 10 KN
编辑程序时,设定力以10kn 递增 【加to】

In the calculation of ****, calculation of the maximum shear force is important and that of the state of ship on the water and load distribution.
在计算过程中,计算最大剪力是重要的,船体在水面的状态和载荷分布也是重要的
【可试用】
In the calculation of ****, calculation of the maximum shear force is important, so are the state of ship on the water and load distribution.

The mistake was corrected and marked in red in revised paper.

【翻译】桌面是朝上的

Then the ***** process of the four cases were simulated. 【were 改为was】
接下来模拟了四个案例的****过程
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mac194

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提醒:
  不要随便相信  "__头衔__"  者进言, 币多不代表博闻

建议:
      学我按 "浮力中心" 临时找
  https://slideplayer.com/slide/4318707/
      或
  https://slideplayer.com/slide/4318497/   [看图]

更正:
  The repaired compartments with some water 不行, 因为毫无意义
    For stability, fill unpaired compartments with ballast  也许更合原意

  The up end of...  不对, 该是  upper end  或  top end

  state of ship on the water... 不对,
    the ship's physical condition (shape, load distribution, etc) above water surface
更达意
----------------
可以这样用英语表达吗?谢谢
Center of Buoyancy  浮力中心.jpg

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mac194

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原句:
  The mistake was corrected and marked in red in revised paper.
更好:
  Mistakes previously pointed out by the reviewer (Thank you!!) have been corrected and marked in red in re-submitted copy of the paper


桌面是朝上的
  The table stands upright

  The table's top surface faces up
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mac194

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桌面是朝上的
  The table stands upright
更明确:
  The table's top surface points up (towards the ceiling)
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wyjjf

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5楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2015-10-14 18:45:16
桌面是朝上的
  The table stands upright
更明确:
  The table's top surface points up (towards the ceiling)

The table is essentially pointing up
这样可以吗?
谢谢
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mac194

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6楼: Originally posted by wyjjf at 2015-10-14 20:50:08
The table is essentially pointing up
这样可以吗?
谢谢...

无论桌子是否完全直立, 桌面总朝上, 则用 essentially, 强调重要的是 "总朝上"
  ( 也就是说, essentially 或 in essence  通常写作时意非 "必须" )

流体力学算外流, 向量朝外, 不一定 "朝上", 因此可以考虑写
  The tabletop always faces out  或  The tabletop is facing outwards
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