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从涂层与基体之间的界面处呈现了大量的缺陷可以得出此界面为弱结合界面，Lederman的滑移模型很好的解释了弱结合界面对阻尼的影响。
σr/σ0为应力集中因子，它的范围在1.1 - 1.3之间。

The weakly bonded interface between coating and substrate may be deduced from the presence of a small amount of defect at interface between coating and substrate. A slip model that Lederman used showed the effect of weakly bonded interfaces on the damping capacity . σr/σ0 was the stress concentration factor within the range of 1.1 - 1.3 .

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wxqtjw: 金币+25, 翻译EPI+1 2015-09-30 07:28:36

1、前后时态要保持一致，所以第一句话中的may需要改为might或could；
2、第一句话中between coating and substrate前后用了两次，这是明显重复的，后面的可以省去，把不会引起任何误解；
3、最后一句话需要分开说，连续说下去从语法上看可能不合适。
The weakly bonded interface between coating and substrate could be deduced from the presence of a small amount of defect at interface. A slip model that Lederman used showed the effect of weakly bonded interfaces on the damping capacity . σr/σ0 was the stress concentration factor which was in the range of 1.1 - 1.3.

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