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落日情书: 金币+25, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-09-08 14:18:15
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Furthermore the main map is too small in comparison to the overview map of China.
还有,与整幅中国地图相比,(文中)主图太小。
I suggest an image composition closer to this one here (keep in mind that this is just a rough sketch I put together in 5 min, the final map should look better / more polished that that):
我建议您做一幅合成图像,与这里的一幅差不多(记住:这只是我5分钟合成的一幅草图,最后完成的图应该比这一幅更好或更优美)。
(注:此处审稿人把more polished that that  的than that误拼为that that)
Reducing the size of the overview map allows the real map to be bigger, which increases the readability.
减少整幅地图的尺寸使得真实地图显得更大,也增加了可读性。
(注:审稿人建议您把整幅中国地图缩小)
I also suggest to reduce the intensity of the land use signatures – the lines (the river and the catchments of the reservoirs) should be clearly visible while the land use should function as background information. Probably your GIS software does not support such a graphical finesse. In such a case it might help to export several versions of the map (one with the land use and one without it) and overlay both maps in an image processing software (e.g. Photoshop or GIMP). Using layer transparency you can easily achieve the desired effect.
我同时建议您降低土地用途标记的亮度---土地用途作为背景信息标出即可,线条(代表河流及水库区域)应清晰可见。可能是您的地理信息系统软件不支持这样的图形化处理。如果确实如此,那么,这样做有助于解决问题:采用地图的几种版本(一种有土地用途和另一种没有土地用途),在图像处理软件(例:Photoshop或图像操作程序)中叠加。用图层透明的方法,很容易达到您期望的效果。
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