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落日情书

金虫 (小有名气)

[求助] 几条审稿意见求翻译

Furthermore the main map is too small in comparison to the overview map of China.

I suggest an image composition closer to this one here (keep in mind that this is just a rough sketch I put together in 5 min, the final map should look better / more polished that that):

Reducing the size of the overview map allows the real map to be bigger, which increases the readability.

I also suggest to reduce the intensity of the land use signatures – the lines (the river and the catchments of the reservoirs) should be clearly visible while the land use should function as background information. Probably your GIS software does not support such a graphical finesse. In such a case it might help to export several versions of the map (one with the land use and one without it) and overlay both maps in an image processing software (e.g. Photoshop or GIMP). Using layer transparency you can easily achieve the desired effect.

论文的部分审稿意见一知半解,担心理解错误,求翻译,谢谢!
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落日情书: 金币+25, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-09-08 14:18:15
译文如下:
Furthermore the main map is too small in comparison to the overview map of China.
还有,与整幅中国地图相比,(文中)主图太小。
I suggest an image composition closer to this one here (keep in mind that this is just a rough sketch I put together in 5 min, the final map should look better / more polished that that):
我建议您做一幅合成图像,与这里的一幅差不多(记住:这只是我5分钟合成的一幅草图,最后完成的图应该比这一幅更好或更优美)。
(注:此处审稿人把more polished that that  的than that误拼为that that)
Reducing the size of the overview map allows the real map to be bigger, which increases the readability.
减少整幅地图的尺寸使得真实地图显得更大,也增加了可读性。
(注:审稿人建议您把整幅中国地图缩小)
I also suggest to reduce the intensity of the land use signatures – the lines (the river and the catchments of the reservoirs) should be clearly visible while the land use should function as background information. Probably your GIS software does not support such a graphical finesse. In such a case it might help to export several versions of the map (one with the land use and one without it) and overlay both maps in an image processing software (e.g. Photoshop or GIMP). Using layer transparency you can easily achieve the desired effect.
我同时建议您降低土地用途标记的亮度---土地用途作为背景信息标出即可,线条(代表河流及水库区域)应清晰可见。可能是您的地理信息系统软件不支持这样的图形化处理。如果确实如此,那么,这样做有助于解决问题:采用地图的几种版本(一种有土地用途和另一种没有土地用途),在图像处理软件(例:Photoshop或图像操作程序)中叠加。用图层透明的方法,很容易达到您期望的效果。
由于不清楚作者论文内容,如有出入,望作者根据具体情况调整。
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落日情书: 金币+25, ★★★★★最佳答案, 很好,谢谢 2015-09-08 14:19:37
Furthermore the main map is too small in comparison to the overview map of China.
还有,对于中国概览地图来说,这个主图太小了

I suggest an image composition closer to this one here (keep in mind that this is just a rough sketch I put together in 5 min, the final map should look better / more polished that that):
我建议图像合成,使之接近于这里的这个(记住这仅仅是个草图,我花了5分钟将它们拼起来;而最终的图片应该要更好,需要润色下)


Reducing the size of the overview map allows the real map to be bigger, which increases the readability.
减少概览图的尺寸,能够使实地图看起来更大点,从而增加可读性。

I also suggest to reduce the intensity of the land use signatures – the lines (the river and the catchments of the reservoirs) should be clearly visible while the land use should function as background information. Probably your GIS software does not support such a graphical finesse. In such a case it might help to export several versions of the map (one with the land use and one without it) and overlay both maps in an image processing software (e.g. Photoshop or GIMP). Using layer transparency you can easily achieve the desired effect.
同时,我也建议减少在土地上使用签名,因为图上的这些线条(流向水库的河流和流域)应该足够清晰可见,而土地利用应该作为背景信息。很有可能是你们的GIS软件不支持图形技巧。在这种情况下,它也许能够帮助导出几项不同版本的地图(一个是有土地使用的地图;另一个是没有标注土地使用的地图),并且运用图像处理软件(就是Photoshop和GIMP),重叠两个地图. 引入层透明度,很容易就可以达到想要的效果。
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两位翻译的都很好,追加25个金币以示感谢
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