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mayaya26: 金币+25, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-08-25 16:55:20
Limited by the size of the experimental site, the maximum distance for detecting the metal plate and people through wall is A m and B m, respectively.
单从语言上说，没什么大问题。我在考虑两个问题：
1、实验场地是否用experimental field更合适？
2、用Limited by 开首是否最好？如果不愿意用Limited by开头，也可以考虑：
The maximum distance for detecting the metal plate and people through wall, limited by the size of the experimental site, is A m and B m, respectively.
或者：
The maximum distance for detecting the metal plate and people through wall which is limited by the size of the experimental site is A m and B m, respectively.
感觉还是你的原句更平衡些。 |
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