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to2madeira

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[求助] 语法问题, in accordance with。。。

在语法检查网站 https://www.polishmywriting.com/,贴了这样一段:
The conventional 2D seismic layout is usually assigned to crossing the main structure of exploration area in accordance with its surveying line.
老是提示我“in accordance with”有误,提示说缺动词,想了半天也不知道错在哪里,后来把这个词组改成“along”,就通过了,请教大家,这两个用法有什么不一样吗?
另外,这个网站一检查到被动语态,就提示不妥,在我刚开始学英语的时候,---it‘s long long ago...,老师还说被动语态多于汉语是英语的特点,我真搞不懂了。
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to2madeira: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-07-21 11:20:03
我个人的理解是这里的in accordance with是和前面的assigned相关联的,句子的主干是:
xxx is assigned in accordance with..., 如果这种理解正确,那么这里的in accordance with在用法上是没有任何问题的。倒是assigned to crossing改为assigned to cross可能更好(assigned to后面可以跟名词或者动词)。根据我的理解,我可以把整个句子改写为:
The conventional 2D seismic layout is usually assigned in accordance with its surveying line to cross the main structure of exploration area. (为了说明我的理解正确)
当然用你的原句更好些:
The conventional 2D seismic layout is usually assigned to cross the main structure of exploration area in accordance with its surveying line.
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你这里的along with 是和cross搭配的。而用in accordance with则意思发生了变化,cross the main structure of exploration area 其后的in accordance with 则是修饰前面的词组exploration area,意义上讲不通,所谓缺乏谓语,可能原因在于,后面的in accordance with如果作为定语修饰,若前面是be动词,则语义不同,应该是动词,而缺乏的就是动词,另外定语从句动词是不能省略的。
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3楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2015-07-20 17:57:15
我个人的理解是这里的in accordance with是和前面的assigned相关联的,句子的主干是:
xxx is assigned in accordance with..., 如果这种理解正确,那么这里的in accordance with在用法上是没有任何问题的。倒是as ...

昨晚上网查的结果,in accordance with改成in keeping with,可能更合适,呵呵
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