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It's worth noting that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks existing at this time , which are at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively. When the [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melt increases to 1.38, for sample 5#, there will be existing only one peak at 3497 cm-1, and all the other peaks disappeared.
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It's noticeable  that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks  , which are at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively;whenever for sample 5#, the  ratio of [Li]/[Nb] in the melt( 不知道楼主用的是哪个方法制作的片,melt 这个词再慎重考虑一下)increases to 1.38,  there will be only one peak at 3497 cm-1, and all the other peaks disappeared.
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2楼: Originally posted by Frieda2014 at 2015-07-17 14:56:07
It's noticeable  that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks  , which are at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively;whenever for sample 5#, the  ratio of / in the melt( 不 ...

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inmanyzh: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2015-07-18 08:51:13
第一句用简单句便可,existing可以不要。第二句中的existing更是多余,后半句也是多余(前面都说了only one了)。其他均可:
It's worth noting that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks 【existing建议删除】 at this time at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively. When the [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melt increases to 1.38, for sample 5#, there will be 【existing删除】 only one peak at 3497 cm-1,【 and all the other peaks disappeared后半句多余,如果一定保留,则时态上要统一】.
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