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| It's worth noting that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks existing at this time , which are at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively. When the [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melt increases to 1.38, for sample 5#, there will be existing only one peak at 3497 cm-1, and all the other peaks disappeared. |
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| It's noticeable that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks , which are at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively;whenever for sample 5#, the ratio of [Li]/[Nb] in the melt( 不知道楼主用的是哪个方法制作的片,melt 这个词再慎重考虑一下)increases to 1.38, there will be only one peak at 3497 cm-1, and all the other peaks disappeared. |
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inmanyzh: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2015-07-18 08:51:13
inmanyzh: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2015-07-18 08:51:13
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第一句用简单句便可，existing可以不要。第二句中的existing更是多余，后半句也是多余（前面都说了only one了）。其他均可： It's worth noting that for the sample 4#, there are three absorption peaks 【existing建议删除】 at this time at around 3466 cm-1, 3488 cm-1 and 3498cm-1, respectively. When the [Li]/[Nb] ratio in the melt increases to 1.38, for sample 5#, there will be 【existing删除】 only one peak at 3497 cm-1,【 and all the other peaks disappeared后半句多余，如果一定保留，则时态上要统一】. |
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