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SunShine-91: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-06-23 15:38:07
The oxidation resistance temperature of UFD/SiO2 composites was at least 140℃ higher than that of the pristine UFDs, while it changed relatively little as the shell thickness increased from 10 nm to 50 nm and reached a maximum value around 597℃.
higher than that of 这里对吗？ 可以这么写
relatively little 是不是用错了，怎么替换？ 可以，但是改成while it barely changed as...
reached a maximum value 这样表达是否合理. 合理
整句也可以这么改下：
Being at least 140℃ higher than the oxidation resistance temperature of the pristine UFDs, the oxidation resistance temperature of UFD/SiO2 composites barely changed as the shell thickness increased from 10 nm to 50 nm and reached a maximum value around 597℃. |
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