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1.Silica network densified and small holes sealed because of structural adjustment during heating process, thus the oxidation stopped at lower temperature.
其中用了thus就不要再用and了，另外改用stopped而非was stopped。
2.The oxidation resistance temperature was improved by at least 40℃ over the previous work . Meanwhile, the oxidation ended at 673 and 693℃ for samples 1 and 2 which were lower than pristine UFDs.
was improved at least 40℃ than 需要改为 was improved by at least 40℃ over; 另外，which is lower than pristine UFDs需要改为which were lower than pristine UFDs （前面是两个温度，时态上要统一） |
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