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在路上henu

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[求助] 帮润色下句子,改变下句子结构,加些高大上的词汇更好!!!thank you very much

Two shell-and-tube LHTES units divided into pipe model and cylinder model that hold the same volume/mass of PCM and heat transfer area are considered.

Combined effects of heat conduction and natural convection led to an improved heat storage performance for the horizontal cylinder model more so than that for the horizontal pipe model.

Further study was conducted for the effect of horizontal and vertical unit orientation with different HTF inlets.

Natural convection plays an important role in the melting process for pipe model and cylinder model with different HTF inlets.
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在路上henu

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已散尽金币了,急求翻译,谢谢!!
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2楼2015-05-29 17:09:13
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Two shell-and-tube LHTES units that have different internal designs, either the pipe model  or the cylinder model , that each holds the same volume/mass of PCM and heat transfer area,  are considered.

The combined effects of heat conduction and natural convection led to an improved heat storage performance for the horizontal cylinder model more so than that for the horizontal pipe model.

Further studies were conducted to address the influence of either horizontal or vertical unit orientation with different HTF inlets on ......       the influence  of...   on....

Natural convection plays an important role in the melting process in both pipe model and cylinder model with different HTF inlets.
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4楼2015-05-29 17:49:44
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genhunter

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是翻译还是润色?
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5楼2015-05-29 17:57:49
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genhunter

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呵!文不对题啊!Highlighting?  hmm, let me think.

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6楼2015-05-29 18:01:59
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在路上henu: 金币+14, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-05-29 19:42:57
问下,干吗用?把话说清楚不就行了吗?

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7楼2015-05-29 18:10:43
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在路上henu

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引用回帖:
7楼: Originally posted by genhunter at 2015-05-29 18:10:43
问下,干吗用?把话说清楚不就行了吗?

就是文章摘要前面有个部分是highlights,简单概括下文章内容,,查阅其他文献,发现都没有逗号等标点符号

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7楼: Originally posted by genhunter at 2015-05-29 18:10:43
问下,干吗用?把话说清楚不就行了吗?

谢谢
帮润色下句子,改变下句子结构,加些高大上的词汇更好!!!thank you very much
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6楼: Originally posted by genhunter at 2015-05-29 18:01:59
呵!文不对题啊!Highlighting?  hmm, let me think.

谢谢您
帮润色下句子,改变下句子结构,加些高大上的词汇更好!!!thank you very much-2
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帮润色下句子,改变下句子结构,加些高大上的词汇更好!!!thank you very much-3
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