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[求助] 润色一句话(汉译英),谢谢。

陶瓷材料所具有的特殊力学性能(如耐磨、耐腐蚀、耐高温等)、物理性能(如压电、铁电性能等),可以满足现代科学技术发展的对材料性能的需要,在医疗、生物、通讯、电子、机械、航空、航天、军事等高科技领域中得到了广泛的应用。
【翻译】Ceramic material with special mechanical properties (such as wear resistance, corrosion resistance, high temperature resistance, etc.), physical properties (such as piezoelectric, ferroelectric properties)  can satisfie the need of the development of modern science and technology on the properties of the material, which has been widely used in medical, biology, communications, electronics, machinery, aviation, aerospace, military and other high-tech fields.

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八角寨: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助, 非常感谢。 2015-05-16 20:45:32
Ceramic material with  unique mechanical properties (such as wear resistant, corrosion resistant, high temperature resistant, etc.) and physical properties (such as piezoelectric, ferroelectric properties)  can satisfy the requirement of on the properties of materials for the development of modern science and technology.  It has been widely used in medical, biology, communications, electronics, machinery, aviation, aerospace, military and other high-tech fields.
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八角寨: 金币+3, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢。 2015-05-16 20:45:24
你这个句子有不少的问题需要调整:
1、如果从翻译角度讲,中英文中的主语不一样(这当然不是问题),但从英文习惯上说,倒是按中文中的主语翻译更好些,也就是把你且面对句子倒过来:
The special mechanical properties such as wear resistance, corrosion resistance and high temperature resistance, and physical properties such as piezoelectric, ferroelectric properties can meet the need of the development of modern science and technology on the properties of the material.
其中用了such as,其实就不需要括号了,而且用such as之后无需etc.了(本来就是举例);满足需要用meet更好(在数学公式中的满足倒是用satisfy)。
如果这样倒过来说,则后面不能用which(因为which是指向Ceramic material)了,所以只能分开两句话(这样其实挺好的,无需太长)。
而且,第二句话中的诸多名字在词性上要同一,如同一用名词等。第二句话可以是:
Ceramic material has been widely used in medicine, biology, communications, electronics, machinery, aviation, aerospace, military and other high-tech fields.
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打字错误,应该是“倒是按中文中的主语翻译更好些,也就是把你前面的句子倒过来:”
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4楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2015-05-16 11:00:02
打字错误,应该是“倒是按中文中的主语翻译更好些,也就是把你前面的句子倒过来:”

感谢帮忙。这样翻译挺好,但有个疑问:
第一句英文中,没有提到陶瓷材料,不能很好体现是陶瓷材料的特殊性能了。谢谢。

The special mechanical properties such as wear resistance, corrosion resistance and high temperature resistance, and physical properties such as piezoelectric, ferroelectric properties can meet the need of the development of modern science and technology on the properties of the material.Ceramic material has been widely used in medicine, biology, communications, electronics, machinery, aviation, aerospace, military and other high-tech fields.
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5楼: Originally posted by 八角寨 at 2015-05-16 11:26:30
感谢帮忙。这样翻译挺好,但有个疑问:
第一句英文中,没有提到陶瓷材料,不能很好体现是陶瓷材料的特殊性能了。谢谢。

The special mechanical properties such as wear resistance, corrosion resistance an ...

原译虽然主语与动词之间相距较远,这在科学文献中可以接受。
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6楼: Originally posted by genhunter at 2015-05-16 11:37:00
原译虽然主语与动词之间相距较远,这在科学文献中可以接受。...

最好是分成二句: Ceramic material has unique properties, such as... It can meet the requirement of xxxx.
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5楼: Originally posted by 八角寨 at 2015-05-15 22:26:30
感谢帮忙。这样翻译挺好,但有个疑问:
第一句英文中,没有提到陶瓷材料,不能很好体现是陶瓷材料的特殊性能了。谢谢。

The special mechanical properties such as wear resistance, corrosion resistance an ...

哦,我居然忘了!放在后面就可以了。
The special mechanical properties such as wear resistance, corrosion resistance and high temperature resistance, and physical properties such as piezoelectric, ferroelectric properties of ceramic material  can meet the need of the development of modern science and technology on the properties of the material.
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