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[求助] 帮忙检查、润色段话。

请高手帮忙检查、润色我的英文表达（四段）。非常感谢。

In order to improve the adhesion property between the A and B, we developed the carbon fibre powder coating technique for A. Four types of coating materials, *1, *2, *3 and *4, were coated on an impregnated fibre bundle before the curing of the A. The diameters of the four types of coated A were increased from 0.50mm to 0.61mm, 0.57mm, 0.58mm and 0.54mm, correspondingly separately.


It should be noted that in the tests, the displacements recorded by the testing machine also included the deformations of the B and the 10 mm-long-free A. The separate tensile tests on the A and finite-element simulation on the B were done to measure their load–deformation curves. The pull-out energy, Et corresponds to the area beneath the pull-out curve, in which the deformation of the 10 mm-long-free A and B has been took away.


For ** technique in this study, we used a stainless steel needle to assist the insertion of the A. First, the needle griped by a mechanical device orthogonally pierced into the B to create a through-hole. Then, a 3mm-lomg A held by a tweezer was implanted into the B along the path of the hole manually.


At the same time, coatings enlarged the diameters of the A to varying degrees according to the different particle morphology. Table 1 shows the diameters of various A.
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89333627: 金币+50, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-03-16 14:17:11
In order to improve the adhesion property (between) 【通常用of，不知这里为何用between】 the A and B, we developed the carbon fibre powder coating technique for A. Four types of coating materials, *1, *2, *3 and *4, were coated on an impregnated fibre bundle before the curing of the A. The diameters of the four types of coated A were increased from 0.50mm to 0.61mm, 0.57mm, 0.58mm and 0.54mm, 【简单的用respectively就可以了】 (correspondingly separately).


It should be noted that in the tests, the displacements recorded by the testing machine also included the deformations of the B and the 10 mm-long-free A. The separate tensile tests on the A and finite-element simulation on the B were done to measure their load–deformation curves. The pull-out energy, Et 【Et是指pull-out energy吧，可在其后加个逗号】 corresponds to the area beneath【也可用under】 the pull-out curve, in which the deformation of the 10 mm-long-free A and B has been took【应该是taken】 away.


For ** technique in this study, we used a stainless steel needle to assist the insertion of the A. First, the needle griped by a mechanical device orthogonally pierced into the B to create a through-hole. Then, a 3mm-lomg【long】 A held by a tweezer was implanted 【manually放这里更好】 into the B along the path of the hole (manually).


At the same time, coatings enlarged the diameters of the A to varying degrees according to the different particle morphology. Table 1 shows the diameters of various A.
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89333627: 金币+50, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-03-16 14:17:18
In order to improve the adhesion between the A and B, we developed a carbon fibre powder coating technique and applied it to A. Four types of coating materials, *1, *2, *3 and *4, were coated on an impregnated fibre bundle before the curing of A. The diameters of the four types of coated A were increased from 0.50mm to 0.61mm, 0.57mm, 0.58mm and 0.54mm, correspondingly.


It should be noted that in the tests, the displacements recorded by the testing machine also included the deformations of B and free A (10 mm in length). The separate tensile tests on A and finite-element simulation on B were performed to establish load–deformation curves. The pull-out energy (Et) corresponds to the area beneath the pull-out curve, in which the deformation of free A(10 mm in length) and B was deducted.


For ** technique developed in this study, we used a stainless steel needle to assist the insertion of  A. First, a needle griped by a mechanical device pierced through B to create a perpendicular hole(s?). Then, a A of 3 mm in length was manually implanted into a piece of B  through hole(s?) with the help of a tweezer .


At the same time,  the diameters of A were increased to varoius degree according to the particles used that had different morphologies. Table 1 shows the diameters of various A.
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