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It is clearly seen that the effective distribution coefficient of Mg2+ ion increases with the increasing MgO concentration in the melts, and it is close to one, indicating that In distributes uniformly in crystal. It can be further seen from Fig. 1 that the effective distribution coefficient of Fe3+ and Zr4+ ions decreases as the doping concentration of Mg2+  increases in the melts.
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jiayou201101: 金币+10, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-01-30 20:56:36
It is clearly seen that the effective distribution coefficient of Mg2+ ion increases with the increasing MgO concentration in the melts, 【with the maximum close to one】, indicating that 【it】 distributes uniformly in crystal. It can be further seen from Fig. 1 that the effective distribution coefficient of Fe3+ and Zr4+ ions decreases as the doping concentration of Mg2+  increases in the melts.

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jiayou201101: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-01-30 20:56:22
[ 为了服务大众, 下附 effective distribution coefficient = Ke 定义 ]
  [    https://books.google.com/books?i ... ion&f=false   ]
  [ 请教:  
      Ke = [固体内浓度] / [溶液内浓度]
      假设 "melt" = "溶液", 为什么你说
      the effective distribution coefficient of Mg2+ ion increases with the increasing MgO concentration in the melts ]

论原句:
  The effective distribution coefficient of Mg2+ ion increases with MgO concentration  [rising] in the melt
  As distribution of Mg2+ becomes more uniform in the crystal, its effective distribution coefficient approaches unity
  Fig 1 shows how the effective distribution coefficients of Fe3+ and Zr4+ ions diminish with Mg2+ dopant concentration rising in the melt

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少用代名词 it 除非像上面那样, 明显的重复, 不易混淆

注意用单数 melt, 非复数 melts

"X increase with Y"  表示 X 和 Y 成正比, X 随 Y增高 而增高, 中英文一样,都不需重复用 "增高", 所以第一句中的 [rising] 可有可无, 有则给读者做心理准备,使第三句更易读些
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jiayou201101: 金币+5, ★★★★★最佳答案 2015-01-30 20:56:44
It is clear that with the increasing of the MgO concentration, Effective distribution coefficient of Mg2+ increases; which indicate it distributes uniformly in crystal . It can be further seen form fig ,while the effective distribution coefficient of Fe3+ and Zr4+ions decrease, the doping concentration of Mg2+ increases .
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3楼: Originally posted by mac194 at 2015-01-30 09:27:08
论原句:
  The effective distribution coefficient of Mg2+ ion increases with MgO concentration   in the melt
  As distribution of Mg2+ becomes more uniform in the crystal, its effective  ...

貌似有个from打成form 了
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6楼: Originally posted by 查看专业户 at 2015-01-30 15:19:18
貌似有个from打成form 了...

distribution of Mg2+ becomes more uniform in the crystal
晶体内镁离子分布变的更均匀

uniform = uni + form = one form = 清一色 [形容词]
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