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在图3可以发现，EB100试样的涂层和基体的显微硬度比较均匀，而PS100试样的基体硬度值也比较均匀，但涂层的硬度值离散性较大，这反应了热喷涂组织的综合力学性能分布不均 。 The microhardness of coating and substrate in sample EB100 was more evenly, while matrix hardness value of the sample PS100 is also relatively uniform, but the coating hardness value of the sample PS100 is greater dispersive, which reflects uneven distribution of the overall mechanical properties of thermal spraying . |
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如果这是Results部分的内容，需要用过去时。我把句子给完全改了，不知是否合适： Even though the microhardness of matrix (or substrate) in samples EB100 and PS100 was relatively uniform, the coating hardness value of PS100 was much more dispersive than that of EB100, indicating an uneven distribution of the overall mechanical properties of thermal spraying. 如果用你的句子，则： 1、 was more evenly应为 was more even； 2、while在句中不适； 3、is greater dispersive不好 4、 uneven distribution前需要有不定冠词。 尝试对你原句修改如下： The microhardness of coating and substrate in sample EB100 was more (这个more需要吗？和谁比呢？) uniform, so was matrix hardness value of the sample PS100. However, the coating hardness value of sample PS100 was more dispersive, which reflected an uneven distribution of the overall mechanical properties of thermal spraying . |
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| 陈述客观事实不用过去式，was换成is更合适，另外while和后面的but均表示转折用一个就行啦！The microhardness of coating and substrate in sample EB100 is more evenly, and matrix hardness value of the sample PS100 is also relatively uniform, but the coating hardness value of the sample PS100 is greatly dispersive, which reflects uneven distribution of the comprehensive mechanical properties of thermal spraying . |
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