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Thank you for your interest in publishing your work with Precision Engineering. I have read your manuscript, "Influence of pitch error on the static performance and positioning accuracy of hydrostatic lead screw with continuous helical recesses" (PRE-D-14-00235), and have chosen to return it to you before sending it out to reviewers. The subject matter is certainly of interest to our readers, and the technical content of the manuscript is accessible to an interested reader, but I'm concerned that the numerous errors in English language usage will unduly influence their opinion.

My experience has been that we can ultimately achieve a faster time to publication by correcting grammatical errors before giving the manuscript to the reviewers for their technical assessment. Perhaps you can ask a colleague who is unfamiliar with the technical content of your work to assess the presentation. Some phrases, "drunkenness of the female unit" for example, translate very poorly.

I also ask that you include in your background research some discussion of prior work in this field by Prof. Alexander Slocum, a longtime contributor to Precision Engineering, and almost certainly one of the eventual readers of your work. One relevant reference is:

Slocum, A. Seyfried, P.; Kunzmann, H.; McKeown, P. & Weck, M. (Eds.) Design and Testing of a Self Coupling Hydrostatic Leadscrew Progress in Precision Engineering, Springer Berlin Heidelberg, 1991, 103-105.


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