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守望的ing

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In our study, the higher expression of CaR mGluR1 and mGluR4 in the jejunal mucosa of the dietary L-glutamate supplemented group. Likely resulted from glutamate receptors detecting ingested glutamate and transmitting this information to intestinal cells. Some studies have indicated that GPCRs including T1R1/T1R3 and mGluR, regulated intestinal hormone secretion and intestinal nutrient absorption. 这两个句子有语法问题,求解》??
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mac194

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我的科学知识不及 ssssllllnnnn 先生,但楼主问了语法问题...
就语法而言:
   the higher expression of.... group  缺动词,不成句
如果
   the higher expression of.... group  现象发生的原因是 glutamate receptors detecting... cells

  The higher expression of.... group
    OBSERVED in our study
      likely resulted from   glutamate receptors detecting... cells

  GPCRs including T1R1/T1R3 and mGluR
    have appeared in some studies [__, ___]
      to regulate intestinal hormone secretion and intestinal nutrient absorption
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jessica21

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
单纯看倒是没有问题,可是总觉得哪里不对,例如第一句,前面那么多,最后宾语只有group,好像有问题似的

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2楼2014-08-25 18:21:38
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ssssllllnnnn

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守望的ing: 金币+5, 有帮助 2014-08-26 14:39:46
第一个句子没说完,和第二个连起来就可以了,其他见大写部分(用什么时态你决定):
In our study, the higher expression of CaR mGluR1 and mGluR4 in the jejunal mucosa of the dietary L-glutamate supplemented group IS likely resulted from glutamate receptors,which detected THE ingested glutamate and transmitted this information to intestinal cells. Some studies have indicated that GPCRs including T1R1/T1R3 and mGluR, regulated intestinal hormone secretion and intestinal nutrient absorption.
3楼2014-08-25 19:17:36
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mac194

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
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3楼: Originally posted by ssssllllnnnn at 2014-08-25 19:17:36
第一个句子没说完,和第二个连起来就可以了,其他见大写部分(用什么时态你决定):
In our study, the higher expression of CaR mGluR1 and mGluR4 in the jejunal mucosa of the dietary L-glutamate supplemen ...

[感谢奖赏]
In our study, the higher EXPRESSION  <- 单数 EXPRESSION = 主词
  of CaR mGluR1 and mGluR4 in the .... group
    likely resulted <- 过去式动词 = 我们实验时的观察
      from
        glutamate receptors DETECTING xx and TRANSMITTING yy to ... cells  <- 动词+ing = 动作

Some studies have indicated that <- have 动词ed = 现在分词
  GPCRs including T1R1/T1R3 and mGluR,  <- GPCRs = 复数
    regulate... absorption. <- 不要用过去式动词 regulated, 用现在式 regulate
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