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[求助] 给外教写了一封信，各位帮忙看看

给外教写了一封信，各位帮忙看看


Dear Doctor Johnson,
How are you?I'm Jane. First of all, thanks for teaching us English.We learned English together and improved a lot.
I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.Well, my English is not fluent,but I have been studying English every class. I answered your questions and had english conversation with my classmates. When I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right. I was afraid that the answer was wrong.My English had become better. I think that my grade should be eighty to ninty.
Thank you very much for your consideration,and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Jane
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北方西毒: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助 2014-05-21 15:05:14
我觉得基本可以。意思表达了,也没有不太礼貌的地方。本身就是对他的评分不满，所以直接表达我认为还是可以的。当然，不同的人表达方式不一样，但是不见得非得一样。个人有个人的表达方式。以下是在楼主基础上，我觉得比较妥贴的表达方式：
Dear Doctor Johnson,
How are you? My name is Jane，in your ... Class.
First of all, thanks for teaching us English.  Under your guidance and help, I have improved a lot over the semester. However, I must say that I never expected to get a grade as low as ... . Well, my English is not as fluent, but I have been studying English hard every class. I answered your questions (actively) and made great efforts to practise speaking English with my classmates. Whenever I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right because I was afraid that the answer might have been wrong. My English had bettered a lot compared to last semester. Therefore, I think that my grade should be eighty to ninety instead of ...
I'd appreciate it very much if you take what I said into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Jane
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4楼: Originally posted by 北方西毒 at 2014-05-20 16:40:37
确实不是很好，觉得哪不对给改改啊...

首先，不能一上来就来一句“I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.” 这显得不太礼貌。老师给分基本不是没有根据的。其次，你说你的英语已有改善，在那些方面表现出来了，举个例子啥的啊。要是我，应该先说：老师，我对你所给的成绩存在疑问，比“don't agree with you ! ”要委婉。让后说明自己做出的一些努力啥的，让后说一下Ta所给的成绩对你的影响，比如GPA,评奖学金啥的。这样晓之以理动之以情，让Ta再考虑考虑。最后再说一下不好意思打扰Ta 了，真的非常感谢Ta这段时间的教课。真诚的希望他能给你一个更好地成绩，不能说80-90这么样子。威胁ta似得。
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6楼: Originally posted by 北方西毒 at 2014-05-20 17:02:10
能写英文的不，委婉点怎么写...

。。。。I am writing the mail to you to make you know that I just have some doubts about the score you evaluate.
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7楼2014-05-20 17:09:51
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北方西毒: 金币+2, ★★★很有帮助 2014-05-21 15:07:12
Dear Doctor Johnson,
How are you?I'm Jane. First of all, thanks for teaching us English.We learned English together and I have  improved a lot with your help.
I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with you about the remaks.Though  my English is not fluent, I have been studying English every class. I answered your questions and had English conversations with my classmates. When I answered your questions, I always thought twice to ensure that my answer was proper.My English have become better. I want to know the reason why I got so bad remarks.
I would appreciate it if you can tell the reason.In that way I can make more progress.
Sincerely yours,
Jane
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2楼2014-05-20 16:36:35
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看出来了，英语确实不咋地
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3楼2014-05-20 16:38:03
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3楼: Originally posted by Paulwolf at 2014-05-20 16:38:03
看出来了，英语确实不咋地

确实不是很好，觉得哪不对给改改啊
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5楼: Originally posted by Paulwolf at 2014-05-20 16:53:53
首先，不能一上来就来一句“I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.” 这显得不太礼貌。老师给分基本不是没有根据的。其次，你说你的英语已有改善，在那些方面表现出来 ...

能写英文的不，委婉点怎么写
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老外很严格的
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每个不满意的现在，都有一个不努力的曾经
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