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给外教写了一封信，各位帮忙看看 Dear Doctor Johnson, How are you?I'm Jane. First of all, thanks for teaching us English.We learned English together and improved a lot. I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.Well, my English is not fluent,but I have been studying English every class. I answered your questions and had english conversation with my classmates. When I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right. I was afraid that the answer was wrong.My English had become better. I think that my grade should be eighty to ninty. Thank you very much for your consideration,and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Jane |
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北方西毒: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助 2014-05-21 15:05:14
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我觉得基本可以。意思表达了,也没有不太礼貌的地方。本身就是对他的评分不满，所以直接表达我认为还是可以的。当然，不同的人表达方式不一样，但是不见得非得一样。个人有个人的表达方式。以下是在楼主基础上，我觉得比较妥贴的表达方式： Dear Doctor Johnson, How are you? My name is Jane，in your ... Class. First of all, thanks for teaching us English. Under your guidance and help, I have improved a lot over the semester. However, I must say that I never expected to get a grade as low as ... . Well, my English is not as fluent, but I have been studying English hard every class. I answered your questions (actively) and made great efforts to practise speaking English with my classmates. Whenever I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right because I was afraid that the answer might have been wrong. My English had bettered a lot compared to last semester. Therefore, I think that my grade should be eighty to ninety instead of ... I'd appreciate it very much if you take what I said into consideration. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Sincerely yours, Jane |
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