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[求助] 给外教写了一封信,各位帮忙看看

给外教写了一封信,各位帮忙看看


Dear Doctor Johnson,
How are you?I'm Jane. First of all, thanks for teaching us English.We learned English together and improved a lot.
I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.Well, my English is not fluent,but I have been studying English every class. I answered your questions and had english conversation with my classmates. When I answered your question, I thought twice to ensure that my answer was right. I was afraid that the answer was wrong.My English had become better. I think that my grade should be eighty to ninty.
Thank you very much for your consideration,and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Jane
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3楼: Originally posted by Paulwolf at 2014-05-20 16:38:03
看出来了,英语确实不咋地

确实不是很好,觉得哪不对给改改啊
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看出来了,英语确实不咋地
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北方西毒: 金币+3, ★★★很有帮助 2014-05-20 17:16:24
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4楼: Originally posted by 北方西毒 at 2014-05-20 16:40:37
确实不是很好,觉得哪不对给改改啊...

首先,不能一上来就来一句“I just want to let you konw that I don't agree with the grade that you gave me.” 这显得不太礼貌。老师给分基本不是没有根据的。其次,你说你的英语已有改善,在那些方面表现出来了,举个例子啥的啊。要是我,应该先说:老师,我对你所给的成绩存在疑问,比“don't agree with you ! ”要委婉。让后说明自己做出的一些努力啥的,让后说一下Ta所给的成绩对你的影响,比如GPA,评奖学金啥的。这样晓之以理动之以情,让Ta再考虑考虑。最后再说一下不好意思打扰Ta 了,真的非常感谢Ta这段时间的教课。真诚的希望他能给你一个更好地成绩,不能说80-90这么样子。威胁ta似得。
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