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润色一句中文翻译【中译汉】，谢谢。
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请高手帮润色（尤其是字体加粗部分）【中译汉】，非常感谢。 标题：***的MATLAB数值模拟 翻译1：Numerical Simulation of *** with MATLAB 翻译2：Numerical Simulation of MATLAB for *** 摘要：运用MATLAB模拟了光波的衍射和干涉现象，通过形象直观的图形演示能够加深学生对光波的衍射和干涉现象的理解，激发学生的学习兴趣，提高教学质量。 ABSTRACT：The phenomena of diffraction and interference of light were studied using MATLAB. Through the visual images of the graphical presentation, it can enhance students' understanding of diffraction and interference of light, arouse students' learning interests and improve teaching effects. |
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小兰花: 金币+16, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢版主帮忙。 2014-04-24 17:48:59
小兰花: 金币+16, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢版主帮忙。 2014-04-24 17:48:59
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1、The phenomena of diffraction and interference of light were studied using MATLAB ，觉得改为The light diffraction and interference phenomena were studied using MATLAB 较好，意思一样。另外就是中文为模拟，那动词应该是simulate。那应该改为The light diffraction and interference phenomena were simulated using MATLAB. 2、形象直观的图形演示应译为the vivid and straightforward graphical presentation,还有Through the visual images of the graphical presentation, it can enhance students' understanding of diffraction and interference of light, arouse students' learning interests and improve teaching effects. 这一句型的主语不能用it,要把主语完整写出来,形象直观的图形演示可做主语，没有必要翻译成这种句型。建议改为The vivid and straightforward graphical presentation can enhance students' understanding of diffraction and interference of light, arouse students' learning interests and improve teaching effects. 3、觉得没必要分为两句，建议改为The light diffraction and interference phenomena were simulated using MATLAB because the vivid and straightforward graphical presentation can enhance students' understanding of diffraction and interference of light, arouse students' learning interests and improve teaching effects. 两句话之间有这种逻辑关系。点明为何要这样做。 4、标题建议用1或者MATLAB Numerical Simulation of *** 。 |
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