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满谛

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Light rain

Spit is endless, flower is eternal.
Spirit is around, love is colorblind.
Bird is singing, grass is sleeping.
At dawn, I want to see you.

The flower told me a secret.
The spirit is my closed friend.
The grass kissed the song.
At dusk, I wish were you here.

Listen to the voice in flower.
Breath the faint scent in wind.
Touch the space in hand.
Your so sweet sweet smile is in my heart.

I wait you here in the light rain.
I feel the time travel.
No matter how far away.
You will come to me.

                                                           2014-3-3
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listen to the voice in flower.
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maodou896

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Lopemann: 金币+3, lol! 2014-03-03 16:48:27
Read it again ang again ,the beauty screen  come into my mind.The light rain ,as a  poetry carrier,juat is a little bit desolation .A wait is endless and pain our heart,from dusk to draw,you were waiting for the love all the time. Especially the last four sentence, it express the eternal love for your sweetie through the grief scene,which we can feel your true love with a little bit pain in heart.
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Coble

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Awesome. I love it even more if you wrote the poem.

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如果天堂里没有你,我宁愿活在地狱。
2楼2014-03-03 10:36:35
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maodou896

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00waterh: sorry, only english is allowed here. thanks for ur understanding 2014-03-03 16:02:42
Spit is endless 这句是什么意思?谢谢
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小怪兽-哲顿

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how sweet love . Best wishes to you
向上的路是痛苦和艰难的
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zyjzw

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3楼: Originally posted by maodou896 at 2014-03-03 11:45:05
Spit is endless 这句是什么意思?谢谢

spit means light rain, I think
另一个江湖,别样的沧桑...
6楼2014-03-03 14:43:01
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zyjzw

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Lopemann: 金币+1, always 2014-03-03 16:48:41
sigh, pure love is so popular these days
另一个江湖,别样的沧桑...
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tuqin2575

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fungixx: 金币+2 2014-03-03 21:40:51
I think the one who will come and love you can feel the way you feel the world. Just wait in a smile, with your heart shed in no rain.
Befreeinyourway,justliketheshinninglighteveryday.
8楼2014-03-03 18:58:48
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满谛

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8楼: Originally posted by tuqin2575 at 2014-03-03 18:58:48
I think the one who will come and love you can feel the way you feel the world. Just wait in a smile, with your heart shed in no rain.

thank you
listen to the voice in flower.
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meiyimeayer

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“No matter how far away.You will come to me.”
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