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满谛

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[交流] light rain

Light rain

Spit is endless, flower is eternal.
Spirit is around, love is colorblind.
Bird is singing, grass is sleeping.
At dawn, I want to see you.

The flower told me a secret.
The spirit is my closed friend.
The grass kissed the song.
At dusk, I wish were you here.

Listen to the voice in flower.
Breath the faint scent in wind.
Touch the space in hand.
Your so sweet sweet smile is in my heart.

I wait you here in the light rain.
I feel the time travel.
No matter how far away.
You will come to me.

                                                           2014-3-3
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listen to the voice in flower.
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3楼: Originally posted by maodou896 at 2014-03-03 11:45:05
Spit is endless 这句是什么意思?谢谢

spit means light rain, I think
另一个江湖,别样的沧桑...
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Coble

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Awesome. I love it even more if you wrote the poem.

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2楼2014-03-03 10:36:35
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maodou896

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00waterh: sorry, only english is allowed here. thanks for ur understanding 2014-03-03 16:02:42
Spit is endless 这句是什么意思?谢谢
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maodou896

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Lopemann: 金币+3, lol! 2014-03-03 16:48:27
Read it again ang again ,the beauty screen  come into my mind.The light rain ,as a  poetry carrier,juat is a little bit desolation .A wait is endless and pain our heart,from dusk to draw,you were waiting for the love all the time. Especially the last four sentence, it express the eternal love for your sweetie through the grief scene,which we can feel your true love with a little bit pain in heart.
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