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Light rain Spit is endless, flower is eternal. Spirit is around, love is colorblind. Bird is singing, grass is sleeping. At dawn, I want to see you. The flower told me a secret. The spirit is my closed friend. The grass kissed the song. At dusk, I wish were you here. Listen to the voice in flower. Breath the faint scent in wind. Touch the space in hand. Your so sweet sweet smile is in my heart. I wait you here in the light rain. I feel the time travel. No matter how far away. You will come to me. 2014-3-3 |
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| Read it again ang again ,the beauty screen come into my mind.The light rain ,as a poetry carrier,juat is a little bit desolation .A wait is endless and pain our heart,from dusk to draw,you were waiting for the love all the time. Especially the last four sentence, it express the eternal love for your sweetie through the grief scene,which we can feel your true love with a little bit pain in heart. |
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