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xichong

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[求助] 一句话,语法怎么改!

By contrast,  Barrier can only block smaller amounts of sand, but has a higher SBR  that is about 96.7% than Fence。这个that is about 96.7%放在than Fence的前面还是后面是用that还是 which

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By contrast,  Barrier can only block smaller amounts of sand and has a higher SBR    than Fence,which is about  96.7% of the total.
一是这里中文虽然表示转折,但不用but ,用and更合适。二是is about 96.7%为非限制性定语从句,用which.三是 96.7%是什么的96.7%?建议指出来,是不是总量的96.7%?
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当然是用that ,不考虑内容,但是语法就不通过
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3楼2014-02-28 14:55:43
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RXMCDM: 金币+1, 多谢应助! 96.7% 是 SBR ,还以为作者指amount of sand呢 2014-02-28 19:57:10
xichong(RXMCDM代发): 金币+12, 多谢应助! 2014-03-15 22:55:42
RXMCDM: 翻译EPI+1 2014-03-15 22:55:49
By contrast,  Barrier can only block smaller amount of sand, but has a SBR  that is about 96.7% higher than Fence。

that和 which都可以,但that好些
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4楼2014-02-28 19:51:30
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如果想让句子活泼些,By contrast可以改为In sharp contrast
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5楼2014-02-28 21:58:15
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RXMCDM: 金币+1 2014-03-01 00:13:10
RXMCDM: 多谢应助! 2014-03-01 00:13:21
xichong(RXMCDM代发): 金币+7, 多谢应助! 2014-03-15 22:56:05
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(重要: 建议明示下面 (1) / (2) 方程,避免混淆)

(1)
Although Barrier cannot block as much sand, its SBR is nearly twice, or at least 96.7% higher than that of Fence.

战术: 两个比较,但只用一次 "than" 只用一次 "SBR"
"grains of sand" 可数, "sand" (整体) 不可数,必须用 "much" / "less" 形容多少
  "less" = "not as much"
子句 "Although..." 主题是 "Barrier",主句马上以 "its" 开头,不可能误解
[代名词] "that" = "SBR"    //   "that of Fence" = "Fence's SBR"

我不懂是
(1) Barrier's SBR = Fence's SBR x 1.967 (96.7% higher than Fence's SBR)
还是
(2) Barrier's SBR = Fence's SBR x 96.7% (96.7% of Fence's SBR)

如果是 (1),就用以上 (1) 句
如果是 (2),就用以下 (2) 句

(2)
Although Barrier cannot block as much sand, its SBR is nearly as high, or at least 96.7% that of Fence.
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