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Lopemann

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[交流] 【activity】Paraphrase practice six

Today our sentences are:
Although the biotech in Australia is coming out quickly, it doesn't mean it is easy, and will keep coming out quickly .

My version:

Although Australia’s biotech success has come quickly, it has by no means come easily and the path to future success is not assured.

@BOCHEMISTRY


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I will give you guys a sentence or sentences on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you want.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.


[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2014-2-27 at 06:10 ]
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Got it, thank u

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Lopemann: 金币+1, Hope you can write something for me next time :p 2014-02-26 17:23:24
Umm it.s hard for my level , could u give us an example first

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2楼: Originally posted by BOCHEMISTRY at 2014-02-25 07:01:53
Umm it.s hard for my level , could u give us an example first

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Lopemann: 金币+5, alright mate, we always think differently, but your vertion looks good. 2014-02-26 05:27:06
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-02-26 17:23:32
Although the biotech in Australia is coming out quickly, it doesn't mean it is easy, and will keep coming out quickly .
......?
My version: It is never easy for biotech to advance significantly in Australia, however, Australia makes it work and will hang on to it in the future.
在自己没有翅膀的肩上,背负了真实和梦想。
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