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[½»Á÷] Writing Activity 1, December 4th to December 6th (Three articles available)

Guys I know English writing has become more and more an issue.

Having seen this, I want to run a series of writing activities for the following month.

Feel free to participate.

Just keep in mind.
No matter how much you read, how much you listen, if you never ever actually write something,
there is no way for you to write a good article in examination condition.

If you do not want to write anything but have the proofreading ability, you are also more than welcomed to pick up others' mistakes

All the writing activities will be put in a folder I made.
You can subscribe it if you want.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

After you finish writing this topic, please post your article here.
If I've got enough time, I can do some proofreading for you but it's not guaranteed.
I will highlight the articles I think highly of.  


Activity one:
Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2013-12-11 at 15:58 ]
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14Â¥: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-07 09:11:45
In a time when changing mind is out of tone with overwhelming information intake, whether to report crime details has become more and more an issue. Despite the risk that crime details may mislead t ...

I find you are good at writing articles. After proofreading, this is definitely a good one in exam.
ps: I will continue to focus on your writing activity, and I think the topic or the articles should not be limited to examinations.
18Â¥2013-12-11 15:50:46
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tuqin2575

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You are a free teacher here. HAHA.
Befreeinyourway,justliketheshinninglighteveryday.
5Â¥2013-12-04 21:23:34
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5Â¥: Originally posted by tuqin2575 at 2013-12-04 21:23:34
You are a free teacher here. HAHA.

I should say I am a learner
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6Â¥2013-12-04 21:26:09
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Lope, I will write this writhing on Saturday night, please waiting for me
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