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[½»Á÷] Writing Activity 1, December 4th to December 6th (Three articles available)

Guys I know English writing has become more and more an issue.

Having seen this, I want to run a series of writing activities for the following month.

Feel free to participate.

Just keep in mind.
No matter how much you read, how much you listen, if you never ever actually write something,
there is no way for you to write a good article in examination condition.

If you do not want to write anything but have the proofreading ability, you are also more than welcomed to pick up others' mistakes

All the writing activities will be put in a folder I made.
You can subscribe it if you want.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

After you finish writing this topic, please post your article here.
If I've got enough time, I can do some proofreading for you but it's not guaranteed.
I will highlight the articles I think highly of.  


Activity one:
Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2013-12-11 at 15:58 ]
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I will bring my articles soon, haha~
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00waterh: »ØÌûÖö¥ 2013-12-07 08:36:24
00waterh: ½ð±Ò+15, ESEPI+1, good idea,maybe it will be better if reporters think several times before they reveal the details of crime. 2013-12-07 09:07:18
Lopemann: È¡ÏûÖö¥ 2013-12-07 09:11:50
Nowadays, information updates in the speed faster than we can receive. So does crime reports. There are many people holds the view that the media should not report details, because the teenagers need a healthy media environment. However, I think reporting details does more good than bad.
Firstly, we have the right to know the truth. If the media refuses to tell us the details, many people will find another way to figure out, and some bad guys would use this as an opportunity to mislead public opinion.
Secondly, many parents worry that more details of crimes, especially about drug abuse, violence, sex related crimes, will adversely affect the development of teenagers in mental healthy. But we can stop the media, we cannot stop the games. Many teenagers are addicted in virtual lives created in the games, and some of them cannot even distinguish the real life from the virtual one. Telling details of crimes can be used to teach young people what is right and what is wrong from the real world.
Thirdly, reporting the details can lead us to know what means the crimes will use against the victims, Making citizens be prepared when crimes come.
Above all, I think disclosing details of crimes will do more good than bad to the public.  The media should report details.
13Â¥2013-12-06 22:33:04
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14Â¥: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-07 09:11:45
In a time when changing mind is out of tone with overwhelming information intake, whether to report crime details has become more and more an issue. Despite the risk that crime details may mislead t ...

I find you are good at writing articles. After proofreading, this is definitely a good one in exam.
ps: I will continue to focus on your writing activity, and I think the topic or the articles should not be limited to examinations.
18Â¥2013-12-11 15:50:46
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19Â¥: Originally posted by Lopemann at 2013-12-11 15:56:51
haha there is a bro anxiously preparing for TOEFL.

And according to my survey results, quite a few people come here for exams.
http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=6572318...

But I still find 40% of the people surveyed come English cafe just because "I just like English"
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