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1 - The experimental needs a lot of work. How did you do fluorescence measurements? What electrolyte did you test in? Did you use NMP in your slurry? These are just example of what is missing. Please be MUCH more detail oriented in this section.

2 - How do Zn and O from fluorescence lead you to conclude that "the pyrolitic products is stoichiometric "?? That seems impossible based on there being O in the cathode material.

3 - Can you really use 5 significant figures in reported gravimetric capacities?

4 - Page 4, lines 31 - 36. I think that claim is too strong given the figure. Also, line 56 to page 5 line 2 - the sentence beginning "Especially..." I don't think you can make such a claim when you show just one cell having better capacity retention between 40-50 cycles. The fact that that cell had lower capacity during cycles 1-40 make it likely to have better retention at cycle 50.

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