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研一小白 刚写的作文 求大神修改错误
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A White Lie When I read a story about mother's love ，I will recall something on my best friend. my best friend，li zheng，has been living a happy life before I was in grade three senior high school, but everything changed since his father passed away four year ago. I was shocked when I heard the news of partner's father's death. Because uncle li was very well while I met him two weeks ago. My partner's mother is a laid-off worker， so his family's life was more poor because of his father's death. With the coming of the college entrance examination ，his mother decided not to let him know about it. All friend and relatives of him act as if nothing happened and we quietly held a funeral. In his absence，his mother was in tears and three jobs. Until the end of the university entrance examination he didn't really know the lie. Although he is unlucky，he didn't give up the dream of university because of the influence of his father＇s death . In order to reduce the burden of mom，he did a part-time job. Now he has successfully completed the college. Sometimes a lie is necessary and good. From this thing，I know mother's give us hope to overcome difficulties and is very great. |
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