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Reviewer #2: It is recommended that the document be submitted for proofreading as there are plenty of grammatical as well as typographical errors. (e.g. Fig.1 vs. Figure 2; EC vs. E.C.; repetition of words occurs; spaces incorrect before comma; careless spelling mistakes e.g. galavnealed, softening, etc.).  Sentences are poorly constructed.  (e.g. "the", "a", "an" - often left out of sentences).  
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