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herozhq0411
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Reviewer #1: Please see attachment for comments. Reviewer #2: It is recommended that the document be submitted for proofreading as there are plenty of grammatical as well as typographical errors. (e.g. Fig.1 vs. Figure 2; EC vs. E.C.; repetition of words occurs; spaces incorrect before comma; careless spelling mistakes e.g. galavnealed, softening, etc.). Sentences are poorly constructed. (e.g. "the", "a", "an" - often left out of sentences). Some sentence structures are difficult to understand. The wording does not reflect the meaning of the sentence i.e. "..manufactured safe accessory such as A, B and C pallor." What does this mean? Safety critical design sections such as A, B and C pillar in automotive design? Too many ideas are covered in one sentence. Heading of Table 1 can be shortened. Remove "used in this investigation". |

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Reviewer #1: Please see attachment for comments. Reviewer #2: It is recommended that the document be submitted for proofreading as there are plenty of grammatical as well as typographical errors. (e.g. Fig.1 vs. Figure 2; EC vs. E.C.; repetition of words occurs; spaces incorrect before comma; careless spelling mistakes e.g. galavnealed, softening, etc.). Sentences are poorly constructed. (e.g. "the", "a", "an" - often left out of sentences). Some sentence structures are difficult to understand. The wording does not reflect the meaning of the sentence i.e. "..manufactured safe accessory such as A, B and C pallor." What does this mean? Safety critical design sections such as A, B and C pillar in automotive design? Too many ideas are covered in one sentence. Heading of Table 1 can be shortened. Remove "used in this investigation". ÎÒÊǵÚÒ»´Î£¬ºÃ¶à¶¼²»¶®£¬¸ÐлÄúµÄÖ¸µ¼~~ ÕâÊÇÉó¸åÈ˵ÄÒâ¼û£¬µ«ÊÇÉó¸åÈË#1µÄÒâ¼û±à¼Ã»Óз¢¸øÎÒ£¬ÎÒÊDz»ÊÇдÐÅÒª°¡£¬¶à¶àÖ¸½Ì£¬¸Ðлing |

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9Â¥2013-05-10 22:34:05
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